Friday, December 5, 2014

Question 2

Should we, as humans, value creations? Even bad ones?

As humans creations are what we strive on throughout our lives. Human lifespans range from one to one-hundred and ten years. Creations are what keep us motivated through our lifes because everything is a creation In a way. Without creations we would still be in there Stone Age since nothing would have been created. Every creation is an advance for everyone not just humans. Humans should value these creations more though since we can take action with the creation and evolve it.

Every creation has a good purpose. That means a bad creation does not exist since every creation is an advance in its own way. A human should value every creation because any and every creation can lead to an even more remarkable discovery. People say the atomic bomb was a bad decision to make but, since the atomic bomb further things have led off that to new creations. As humans we strive for creativity and new things to mess with in the future.

2 comments:

  1. Cameron, attempt to be more in-depth with your analysis. Also, pay close attention to your diction issues. Also, think more deliberately about your syntax as a few of your sentences seem disjointed and underdeveloped. Also, give more information on specific examples, like how can the atomic bomb lead (or has lead) to other advancements. Demonstrate to your reader how each of these creations do, in fact, cause adancements even if they are creations for purposes other than that of good.

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  2. I like how this elaborates on good creativity. I guess there could have been a little bit more elaboration, but aside from that, I like this.

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